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Yuri ([personal profile] slice_of_life) wrote in [community profile] randangonpa 2018-03-18 11:19 am (UTC)

[But when it was four out of seventeen, that was more than 20% rate of misspelling a word...]

Despite that... there is a feeling in this poem, isn't there? It's the feeling of... unease... doubt... uncertainty.

...You even used a little metaphor, which is good.

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